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Neotec
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0 posted 2006-09-19 09:57 AM


Unknow he looks
Seeing her there
He looks upon her
Not knowing what to say
Sleepy he watchs
As Justbleu turns from him
Away she goes
With a man
Who will hurt her in the end
Leaving someone in the wake
That loves her always.


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-09-21 07:21 PM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-09-21 08:18 PM


I do love this

a bit sad, touching

Neotec
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3 posted 2006-09-21 10:17 PM


thank you James
Neotec
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4 posted 2006-09-21 10:18 PM


Passing Shadows, well the name there in the poem is the one i am talking about. you might be able to see some of her work here on the webpage
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-09-21 11:16 PM



good write Neotec...

Neotec
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6 posted 2006-09-22 12:47 PM


thank you My Lady : ( but it is a sad one that the person can't see it
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