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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-09-19 07:36 AM


I still don't understand
how it was you did command
my attentions held in that way
when I really just wanted to look away
only so that I could hide
the flittering felt inside
as butterflies began to fly
the moment before I got lost

in your eyes.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-19-2006 08:57 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-19 07:56 AM



Oh, WOW....

sigh.

'Atta girl!

More, please.


Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-09-19 08:58 AM



Beautiful!!!!  Oh *Sigh*

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Martie
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3 posted 2006-09-19 10:28 AM


I think I'll sigh too, Donna....lovely poem!
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-19 03:56 PM




this must be a poem for sighing
that's exactly what I'm going to do
sigh...


Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-09-19 07:41 PM


Its odd, but at that moment, that was sortah all I could do, too....

Ladies, thank you each SO much!!!

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