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Spike Daft
Junior Member

since 2006-09-12

Posts 23
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-09-19 01:30 AM

Lullaby

Sing to me a lullaby
Sing of the wind whisp’ring though dark pines
Sing of a warm and welcome light
And soothe away these hateful times
Sing to me of peace and sunsets
Sing of dusk falling by the lake
Sing until I succumb to sleep
And sing again when I awake
For with each weaving of your words
The soothing salve that is your voice
I cannot help but linger near
And listen as though I have no choice
With each word you choose to speak or sing
I am lulled into a deeper trance
And I sway to the rhythm of your voice
A slow and soothing inner dance
So sing to me of better times
Of long autumn walks and peaceful miles
Sing of a world where no one hates
Of caring and peace and friendly smiles
And I will sleep, and I will know
Of all the wonders you have known
And listen to your lullaby
Until my dreams come call me home

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-09-19 02:12 AM

Andrea, I think this is a lovely verse. It flows nicely and rests gently against the heart.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-09-19 07:41 AM

So very soft and lovely of a write, much enjoyed your words here.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-09-19 09:02 AM

"Of long autumn walks and peaceful miles
Sing of a world where no one hates
Of caring and peace and friendly smiles
And I will sleep, and I will know
Of all the wonders you have known
And listen to your lullaby
Until my dreams come call me home"

Beautiful Andrea!
My favourite lines above.
With a smile I welcome you to Passions!

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-09-19 04:17 PM

sweet lullaby Andrea...

william foos
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

5 posted 2006-09-19 04:21 PM

this would be so sweet to a melody that would make any loud child go right to sleep great job

i see what i write and write what i see

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-09-22 12:24 PM

I can almost hear the melody the words are so lyrical.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

7 posted 2006-09-23 07:03 AM

Excellent Work

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2006-09-23 09:52 AM

You are equally talented with both pen and brush! Not only are you a fine writer, but you are a fine artist as well! I checked out your gallery of artwork, and if I were to pick a favorite, it would be "Moon Bath". Mind you, each and every one of them was a fine display of artistic talent.

Big hug to a talented aesthete!
EA

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