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Open Poetry #39

Keeping Passion's Watch

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2006-09-18 04:59 PM

Keeping passions’ watch
A lone voice sings in darkness
Resolute in cause
Even the moon must answer
Nodding through bobbing branches

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-09-18 06:45 PM

Strong and steady, as your write.
TD

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2006-09-20 12:48 PM

wonderful! I liked the flow and truth to this.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-09-20 12:56 PM

INClan~

It is always such a pleasure to find that you have visited and left a beauty for my eyes~

TANKA-you so much~
Perfection once more~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-09-21 12:39 PM

short and sweet, with a kick

I love it!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2006-09-21 02:22 PM

Thank you all for reading and commenting. I am deeply honored that poets, who I greatly respect and who read a ton of poetry, should find my work worthy. Again, my sincere thanks to you all.

INclan

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