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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-09-18 03:46 PM


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in memory’s halls

where no quarter is given

time remains a thief

©2006 by icebox

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-09-18 04:03 PM


It certainly does!  Hope you're well, Mr. C.  *hugs*....jo
Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-09-18 04:34 PM


Yes, so it does now that you mention it and I usually find myself agreeing with what you say!  
Martie
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3 posted 2006-09-18 04:46 PM


icebox...

it's true isn't it....like a thief it takes a face or a smile and voice.  Something remains though..I think it's a feeling.  

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-19 04:29 PM





you make me think
about time's winged chariot...


Margherita
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5 posted 2006-09-20 01:42 PM


I am captured by your words and my eyes moved from the title to the haiku in the attempt to bring them together ... and I know how this feels, yes.
God loves his children and even though we feel the heaviness of our "mistakes", when we connect with our divine Creator we are comforted instantly and this Love restores the lightness of being ... of BEING.
Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-09-20 01:54 PM


I ditto Margherita's comment adding...
when we think time is the worst it can be to us, sometimes, that's when it is for our own good...the time to self examine....we are only children in our adult bodies...yanno?  (Hugs)

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-09-21 12:32 PM


indeed
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