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MukkaKukka
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0 posted 2006-09-18 06:52 AM



This is the rain.

It carries.

It keeps track of the days of Fall.

The difference between distance and barrier is this:

A Woman comes, make-up running

but this is the rainy season

and the message...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-18 07:10 AM


Rain can bring many messages, indeed!

Welcome to Passions!  Please, check
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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-09-18 10:08 AM


Greetings, MukkaKukka!

Please forgive me, but how do you pronounce your unusual user name?

Mucka Kucka or Mooka Kooka?

"It is thru a broken roll`d up newspaper that I sing" ~ And your voice carries well in the Fall rains!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel


MukkaKukka
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3 posted 2006-09-18 10:24 AM



Its, well its from a finnish writers name, he was Timo K. Mukka, and Kukka is a "flower"

It is just Mukka Kukka as okay is oukei giddit?

Here about Timo K .Mukka
http://www.kirjasto.sci.fi/mukka.htm

Tomorrow calls, like the sea calls a drowning man.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-09-18 11:08 AM


Thank you for the explanation of your pseudonym. It gives special meaning to it.

Thanks for the link. He died so young, but he left the legacy of his pennings behind. Through them he will live on...


EA

Martie
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5 posted 2006-09-18 12:21 PM


Hi and welcome!

In California we don't have much rain in fall...but enjoyed thinking of it keeping track of time.  Here falling leaves do the same.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-09-18 01:59 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions MukkaKukka!
Very interesting first post.
It is raining here on this Canadian fall day.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Larry C
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7 posted 2006-09-18 04:13 PM


MukkaKukka,
What an interesting write. I grew up in the northwest here in the states and know a thing or two about the rain. Welcome to Passions! Looks like you'll make a great addition to this circle of friends!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-09-19 12:16 PM



here
in the desert
we have so little rain...


welcome MukkaKukka
your poem speaks loudly
to me
the message

Spike Daft
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9 posted 2006-09-19 01:32 AM


I love the rain just as I love this poem. I really like the open ending.

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MukkaKukka
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10 posted 2006-09-19 09:25 AM


I don`t know if I should make my own interpretation of this poem but to me, retrospectively,

This running of make-up is just pure Tarkovsky, since

there is an emotion and then there is the rain like the ending of Stalker, the girl moves the glasses on the table nad then we hear a train.

To me there simply is no difference between the rain and train because they both carry, the clouds distill the water and the cycle, the sea of fertility, I`m sorry

too much Mishima right now...

Drinking Torres and reading Spring Snow...

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-09-19 01:47 PM


came back for another read of
this one
the poem stands lovely
with no interpretation
but Mishima's sea of fertility...

inspiring stuff


MukkaKukka
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Finland
12 posted 2006-09-19 02:07 PM


How bout Spanish brandy?

There`s inpiration for you...

The Lady
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The Southwest
13 posted 2006-09-19 03:39 PM



how 'bout the sea of fertility
and Spanish brandy?
sounds good to me...


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