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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-18 03:04 AM


It seems I know you but I am unsure
Eyes try to peer inside, seeking recognition
Beyond this feeling that I know you
Maybe we passed on Aisle 7 near the canned goods
Two faces glancing, eyes meeting, a smile shared
Now, I think I know you but maybe I don’t
Fingers tap against the steering wheel of my car
I flit through my mental file cabinet and wonder
It’s all pretty silly
But, I really think I have known you before
Maybe it was another lifetime in another place
We are souvenirs of a different era or century
All that remains of who we once were
are the windows to our souls
and a thought
that maybe I know you
It’s a realization that even if I don’t know you
I do.

aziza

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2006-09-18 07:12 AM


ms az..ok ok..busted...yes i was the pebble you skipped on the lake when you were 9..so glad you found me again and saved me from the gravel road to nowhere..

enjoyed your deja view ms

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-09-18 08:22 AM


very very nice write, enjoyed this...
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2006-09-18 08:31 AM


Nicely done Aziza, much enjoyed.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-09-18 10:18 AM


Hmmm, I think I know YOU! There is something vaguely familiar about your essence and presence.

As per usual, I enjoyed your writing.


EA

BloodyEclipse
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since 2006-09-07
Posts 16

5 posted 2006-09-18 10:55 AM


lol...  I've felt like this plenty.  There's this girl that I work with.  She seems so familiar..., but I've never met her.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-09-18 07:27 PM


Nice...reminds me of feelings that I get...I meet someone and their seems to be no connection...then perhaps a few months or a year later...we connect as if it was an assigned moment...James
cactus
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since 2006-09-17
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7 posted 2006-09-18 07:45 PM


Enjoyed it.  Well done.
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-09-18 11:18 PM




excellent aziza
I think I know you too...


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