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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-18 01:32 AM


Sometimes I close my eyes and return to another place in time
As memory-filled pictures create a slide show my mind
I can see the grass dancing and bowing in the breeze
I can see the horses seeking shade in the shadow of the trees
I can smell the fragrance of the alder patch after the summer rains
I am the one among the raspberries, lips and fingers berry-stained.
It seems like only yesterday when I felt hot dirt under my bare feet
I just have to close my eyes to find a bit of peace in my retreat
The puddles wait for sticks and children to make rivers in the mud
Flowers bloom just for me to take my Mom a delicate bud
The hills reach out and hold me close as I roll down the grassy banks
If I close my eyes, I see it all and for these memories I give thanks.
It is in times of stress and sadness that I look back into my past
I always find the answer that all of my adult anxiety will not last
Because down the road and up the bend, in the meadow is where I’ll be
It might be hard to find me as I am at the top of the highest tree
But, I’ll be there and hanging on as I feel the sun upon my face
And I will know that no matter where I go, I never lost my sense of place
When I close my eyes and look back in time I know that I am home
I take with me this history, no matter how far from my past I roam.
The grasses bow in delicacy, the breeze gently caresses my face
The trees hold me close in their arms; the hills help me run my race

aziza

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2006-09-18 01:35 AM


Alison, this is a treasure.  Thanks for sharing it.  
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-09-18 01:43 AM


Thank you so much. I grew up in an incredible place - and grew quite a memory garden.
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-09-18 09:34 PM




lovely aziza
you continue to amaze me...


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-09-18 11:55 PM


And I feel the same about you.  I am in awe of your writing.  Yep.  And I am kinda thinking that you are pretty cool too.

aziza

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