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Water I |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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There are great rivers That cut through the earth And devour towns When the rains come down The beasts rage destroys and conquers the land Who'll cross the river Who'll build the bridge Who'll tame the water People are divided and they endure fear One which can be touched Some cross the river Others avoid it The rest are consumed -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
There is alot of truth in your words and I loved the symbolism. Nicely done. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you. -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 and now the sadness is understood. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
For those who would like to hear and see the poem as recited by the author: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWvKECixtWA  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou SB! -Juju -Juju |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Thanks for putting the link up Serenity. What a treat this is Juju!! Excellent indeed!!!  Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome... simply awesome. hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, Juju -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Good Juju I suspect symbolism here John |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: Thank you. -Juju -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Too little of it and we would die, too much of it and we still die ... may there be balance! Very significant piece, also well recited, dear Juju. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Juju....it is great watching you grow in your writing. I think this is your best yet! *hugs*...jo |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is yet another great write, Julia. I have definately become a fan over the past few years. Thanks, Karen, for the link. You may burn my flag... only after you wrap yourself in it first. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you all for your suport. I am glad you liked my poem. -Juju -Juju |
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