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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-09-17 10:20 AM



woman song
in the house of ra
shimmer speaks silver
but the bronze seduces darkness

sifter of dreams
sways her sensual
around the serpent's spiral
in the man of tree ascending

to the sky then
she is wind swept
she speaks of clouds
and of lava wearing her sins

she begs forgiveness
and offers no redemption
but damp fingers on windows
writing her poems backwards

for the mirrors of a satyr's eyes


_____________

daark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-09-17 10:54 AM



.neht ,meop yadnuS A

.uoy knahT


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-09-17 10:57 AM


em sselb uoy, nus sm
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-09-17 11:15 AM


so very beautiful this is Dark. Much enjoyed your Sunday morning vision.  
Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2006-09-17 11:53 AM


Satyr's eyes and Satyrdays ...  "blue sky, windswept cloud-speak above a tree of knowlege", but caught in ocellar reflections...
~K


MGROVES
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5 posted 2006-09-17 02:38 PM


eno doog a evah
bye~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-09-17 06:29 PM




are damp fingers on windows
not enough for redemption
Stranger?

hopefully she will be forgiven
in spite of herself

like it


aziza
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7 posted 2006-09-18 02:56 AM


I like this so much and am pleased it is how I end my Sunday.

Thank you (smiles)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
8 posted 2006-09-18 07:00 AM


ms gs, humble thanks to you

__________

ms kl, you bless me with your touch

__________

ms groves, thank you for the whisper

_____________

ladyone, my windows are your windows, thank you


____________

ms az, ending your day with a smile is a blessing to this man of the night, thanks

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