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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-09-16 03:58 PM


If I could write a message on your skin,
I know exactly how I would begin.

I love you, I would write, so when ink dried,
my burning love for you would be inside.

Absorbed through living tissue to the bone;
which means, my love, you'd never be alone.

The memory and thrill of our first touch,
when love and lust could never seem too much

would be forever written on your skin--
and that's exactly how I would begin.



© Copyright 2006 Bill Fitzsimons - All Rights Reserved
deasomnians
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1 posted 2006-09-16 05:26 PM


So sweet! And great imagery.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-09-16 08:07 PM


Enjoyed...not sure if she would...I mean the ink...James
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3 posted 2006-09-17 08:03 PM


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4 posted 2006-09-17 08:31 PM


Very sweet and very beautiful Bill. Much enjoyed.  
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