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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2006-09-16 11:21 AM



I dreamed I dreamed
a disturbing dream...
In which I was surrounded

By religious men,
clutching holy books

in one hand,
while they clung steadfastly
to their carnal conditioning
with the white knuckled other.

I heard doctrine, unfamiliar
to both my ears and mind.

With patience, I tried my best
to welcome and embrace
these oral strangers and offer
understanding, but they were
unable to find a door to my heart.

Bound pages,  gilded in gold
were waved furiously overhead,

With the shout of angry words
and the call for violent actions.

I wondered...
at the absense of
and ignorance concerning...

"Love your enemies, bless
them that curse you, do good
to them that hate you, and pray
for them which despitefully use
you and persecute you."

There seemed to be no regard
given to the disregard of...

"For the wrath of man worketh
not the righteousness of God"

An ill wind blew upon the gilded pages
and they opened before my eyes...

I saw that these religious ones
had used the skill of their hands
in the highlighting of many passages.
The words showing through the glow
of fluorescent yellow that set them apart.

I saw many more passages
that their minds and hearts had
highlighted in black permanent marker
and they were unable to receive the
teachings that lay hidden beneath.

I dreamed I dreamed
a disturbing dream.

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-09-16 11:55 AM


I saw many more passages
that their minds and hearts had
highlighted in black permanent marker
and they were unable to receive the
teachings that lay hidden beneath.

~*~

What telling passages...and how sad.
But a very good, thoughtful, write.

Thank you, Larry.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2006-09-17 02:39 PM


No sort of golden books can compete with the perception of our hearts and many seem to have forgotten that love should be the key to whatever interpretation.

Thank you for this thoughtful wise and good write!

Love,
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-09-17 03:41 PM


Uriah,
There is but one rule I follow and that is, do unto others as you would unto yourself.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

4 posted 2006-10-06 09:31 PM


I must agree this is a very good, thoughtful, write!
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