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william foos
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0 posted 2006-09-16 10:43 AM



there is a life
so gentle and sublime
masking the reality
of what may be
we ask God
to stop the flow of blood
from the needless greed
we ask for his blessings
flowing like the river Jordan
or the river of redemption
filled with the tears
of our lives

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-09-16 12:07 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Much poetic talent here.
TD

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-09-16 12:11 PM


Welcome to Passions.
I hope to see more of your work.
Most enjoyed your entrance post.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-09-16 01:39 PM


Welcome aboard the PiP ship, William! From my reading of your first poem, you are sure to have clear sailing on these seas of blue!

Your words were flowing like the River Jordan.

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

MGROVES
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4 posted 2006-09-16 03:05 PM


welcome to pip

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dublin Boy
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since 2006-08-26
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5 posted 2006-09-16 03:43 PM


Nice flow here, William, and your poem exudes spirituality by the bucket-full!

Cheers,
Bill

sandgrain
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6 posted 2006-09-16 05:59 PM


Welcome! Will be looking forward to more of your posts.


   Rae

Sunshine
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7 posted 2006-09-16 06:13 PM



William, I hope you will experience a great Welcome from Passions, and to Passions.  Please, check your email for a very Special Greeting.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-09-17 12:15 PM




welcome William
looking forward to reading
more of your work...

Martie
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9 posted 2006-09-17 10:36 AM


Welcome William..it is wonderful to see you here!!!  I know we will enjoy your poetry, as I did this one.  
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-09-17 11:17 AM


Welcome William, so pleased to meet you.
I very much enjoyed your entrance post and will be looking forward to more from your pen.

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