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Open Poetry #39
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aziza
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0 posted 2006-09-16 03:43 AM

I had a girly girl moment
And went shopping tonight
I snubbed the fragrance and
Accessory counters heading directly
To the boots, stacked heels,
Brown leather – great with jeans
And on to the shirts,
Plunging necklines with teasing
Lace around the edge of the neck
Olive green, like my eyes
Burnt orange like my attitude
Shopping is my retreat from reality
My hell on a good day
My solace on a day when
I am too tired to make sense.
My friends laughed
And rolled their eyes when I told them
That I had a girly girl moment
And I went shopping tonight.

aziza
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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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1 posted 2006-09-17 07:23 PM



oh aziza
I know that feeling
it's my hiding place
on a day when I don't feel like
talking anymore

where can I get those boots?

great poem girly girl
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-09-17 09:03 PM


Aha...I have your eyes...

and I have been told I look good in burnt orange...

but I choose earth tones instead.  [Am working on more passionate colors...like purple.]

Not being a girly-girl, I still smiled at the happy in this...

thanks for sharing!
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-09-18 12:22 PM

Thank you both.

I am not very girly girl either .. but the moment was fun!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-09-18 07:24 PM

Sounds like fun...James
CMGrimm
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5 posted 2006-09-18 09:17 PM

yeah, i know all about those from my wife ... her last girly girl moment cost me a fortune... and she ended up with a ton of clothes that she never wore.


lol


anyway, i really liked this one, well written and entertaining. Well done.

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.
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