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Slumber Time
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Slumber Time |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 30 |
Another year goes by, I dream of thoughts that now seem stale, As the lonely sludge of my existence oozes onwards. I feel viscous in my thoughts and actions, As my new life rises over the smooth, Crystal clear blur that I call the future. I have bitten the untimely, deadly bullet, Locked away the demoralisation of my personal heart break, Though my heart feels tired and stretched, I still soldier on, Pacing on my path of shattered glass. I feel drained and empty, A void to where something, Whole or not, must go. |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 30 |
any comments would be great thx  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
speaks sad to me Joseph very well done... |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
sadly beautiful in its own way... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this certainly traces emotions...slowly beautifully writen |
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