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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2006-09-15 09:09 AM



I was left breathless
when you reached deep
where no one else had
been before,

and I shivered when you
looked at me that way
and your voice

that voice
carried me away

to places never
seen before.

Such was this contentment
from the minute
you walked in the door

where eyes
met smiles
touching heart places.

You are, soul soothe.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Dark Stranger
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West Coast
1 posted 2006-09-15 09:32 AM


ms gs, most enjoyable view of your woman dancing
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-09-15 09:34 AM


beautiful, happy, fresh...goes with the smile on that pretty picture of yours
Martie
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3 posted 2006-09-15 11:00 AM


Donna

"Such was this contentment
from the minute
you walked in the door"

Sure is wonderful when that happens.  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-09-15 11:07 AM


I am happy for your "soul soothe" and for the soul soothe that your lovely poem just gave me!

Beautifully penned, Gentle Spirited One

Loving Light
Linda

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2006-09-15 02:37 PM


Beautiful feelings expressed with soothing tenderness

Hope

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
6 posted 2006-09-15 04:46 PM


...wistful here (where eyes never meet and pisces slips off into the shallows)  It fits your vibrant Gentle Spirit.  
~Klassy

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
7 posted 2006-09-15 05:15 PM


Very nice, GS!  How lucky you are to have a "soul soothe".  Don't suppose we can buy them, can we?  
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-09-15 11:27 PM




"where eyes
met smiles
touching heart places"

you speak not only soothed
but joyful...
beautiful work Gentle Spirit
  

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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9 posted 2006-09-17 11:19 AM


Thanks to each of you for your eyes and words here, I appreciate your time.  
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