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whisperer of stares
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you played with the cat's nonchalant and I listened to your mouth music your saliva was shimmering on words and cry laughs, the girl woman kind you said you enjoyed just talking closing your eyes and watching the sounds of sooth speak move in and out of the afternoon but it made it too warm not to open a window or two and all of that proper-wear was just too close for comfort I smiled at your eyes not smiling when you climbed my stares and presented indecent proposals as if you had practiced their rhyme for a life of lifetimes in your mind ______________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved that last line beautiful! Morning D |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a life of lifetimes.... oh, this piece did make me smile sir, yes it did....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j, thanks lady friend _________ ms gs, thank you for the wave ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whispering well suits your dark...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "just talking"can be so lovely.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You do have a way with words that makes a woman take notice! You put the 'S' in both sensuous ~ and sensitive! You are a very talented writer. Loving Light, EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend _____________ ms martie, thank you neighbor lady for the wave ______________ ms ea, slow hugs to you for the touch |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
practice... climbing stares.... like that phrase ... awww, just was taken with the entire whisper! I forgot how cold my house has been today..  ~ Klassy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, perhaps a warm whisper will sooth the chill again soon..thanks lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I always read your poetry with my eyes closed Stranger... so I can hear what you're really saying |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your whispers caress ones soul My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..I enjoy your eyes always, thank you ms __________ ms groves, thanks lady friend |
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