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Open Poetry #39

Stopped

Spike Daft
Junior Member

since 2006-09-12

Posts 23
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-09-15 12:02 PM

Stopped.

This lack of momentum has me quite distraught
There's been a lot of talking, there's been a lot of thought.
But the wheels are stuck
they refuse to move
And without wheels that turn I have no way to prove
that I'm up and coming, caught firm in my groove
And I refuse to pay attention
I refuse to move.
I tried to ask myself why but got caught up in the moment
and I just shut it all out to drown out my atonement
So I'm wandering, lost in thought and in soul
And just watch that horizion for my due pot of gold

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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2006-09-19 11:13 AM

This is nice. Keep the righting up. It is nice to see poeple I don't reconize

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aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2006-09-23 05:21 PM

"There's been a lot of talking, there's been a lot of thought.
But the wheels are stuck
they refuse to move"

Boy, I am feeling this a lot lately.

Thank you for sharing.
aziza

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-23 10:48 PM

good work
I sure love that last line...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-09-24 12:50 PM

I feel this, yes I do

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