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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-13 10:44 AM


I think you just bumped me with your nose
knocking my elbow to the side
so you could get my hand on your head
Did you think I forgot you?
It won't ever happen.
I believe you come to me
and wrap me in love
as you laugh at these dogs
who think they just might take your place.
They don't know yet
that their place is in another part of my heart.
And that your place is always filled
by you.

aziza

© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
cbautista
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since 2006-09-13
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1 posted 2006-09-13 10:55 AM


An ode to your dog?  It is sweet.
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-09-13 10:59 AM


Yep, she died a year or so ago.  My pumpkin bread eating, back seat driving, laugh in the face of pain, let the wind blow in your hair, love me with unconditional love baby.
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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3 posted 2006-09-13 11:06 AM


ms az...sometimes we put em down
playing god or goddess
sending them to a hopeful heaven

and we resent them leaving

enjoyed you

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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4 posted 2006-09-13 11:45 AM


I liked this poem a lot. I've had dogs like this and it's always sad when they leave…

Although, I must admit the reason why I opened this post was because the title is my sisters name?!?! :O

Beautiful write though; I hope you'll continue postin' more like it. Thanks for sharing

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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HopeS
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5 posted 2006-09-13 01:56 PM


Awwww , I have one already in doggy heaven which broke our heart , although I still have two more that my hubby calls the his  loving little girls

Hope

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-09-14 12:40 PM




sweet tribute
to your unconditional love baby
aziza...

Spike Daft
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7 posted 2006-09-15 01:19 AM


As a fellow pet lover, I really enjoyed this. A wonderful ode to a wonderful friend.

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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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8 posted 2006-09-15 04:46 AM


This was a brilliant poem,  Much enjoyed.  It reminded me of all the dogs I have enjoyed having in my life.

Huggs Kimberly

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
9 posted 2006-09-18 02:37 AM


Thank you all -- she is always and forever my baby girl dog!
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