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sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
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Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 2006-09-12 11:52 PM


Image Of A Girl

Last night while deep in slumber I saw the image of a girl
She had the softest eyes of brown, her smile was white as pearl
I stroked her silken hair of gold and kissed her velvet lips
Then felt the softness of her skin beneath my fingertips

We held each other closely in a tender warm embrace
My eyes took in each feature of her sweet and loving face
Hours seemed like seconds as the time went quickly by
A thousand lifetimes passed within a twinkling of an eye

I softly slipped her hand in mine and they began to clinch
My desire for her was like a parching thirst I could not quench
My heart was pounding wildly at this vision from above
I knew that this would be the girl that I would always love

The beauty of her image held me tightly in its spell
Was she real or just imagined? I really couldn’t tell
And then I woke and next to me within my sleepy view
Was the image of a girl I dreamed and darling it was you


© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
AltairVonCreed
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since 2006-10-16
Posts 14
Nephi, Utah.
1 posted 2006-10-31 01:21 AM


I cannot believe this was passed by, Brilliant work. Depicts perfectly on how I believe a love should be.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-10-31 07:18 AM


glad this got bumped back up! Sorry I missed it!
Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2006-10-31 08:07 AM


What sweetness in this poem catches at my heart!  Beautiful dreams should have a basis in reality... but who's to say, perhaps those exquisite visions of things not yet come to pass are still in the unfolding of future experience.  


JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08
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4 posted 2006-10-31 10:35 AM


Oh!  How sweet!  I want a love like that!  Does she have a sister?



John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

writergrl
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada
5 posted 2006-10-31 03:40 PM


such a lovely, lilting tribute to the one you love; great ebb and flow, well done!

writergrl

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
6 posted 2006-10-31 09:32 PM


Thank you all for the comments. Lol, I almost forgot I had posted this. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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