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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Capture Captured swirling waters stream Make the colors of a dream Moments brought to stop and still Work the magic of the spill Let them fill your palette bright With colors of the prisms light Paint the night to rainbows mode And let the stars of night explode Dab a mental dot of seem Paint the green within the dream Smell the flowers taste the nectar Be the specter and collector Open up your minds brochure Leave a passage to endure Swirl within the moving stream And you will have the finest dream This is the process of the bend This is the treasure at the end |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Let them fill your palette bright With colors of the prisms light Paint the night to rainbows mode And let the stars of night explode YOU are a treasure and then some... excellent poetry flow this morning Sy... Morning!!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is such a keeper. I love this poem. I needed it too. Thank for this creation from your mind. aziza |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have been wondering if there was something wrong with me, as I can see this with eyes open  Nice one m'friend Sy guy. |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Beautifully-worded and rhymed, Seymour--a definite pleasure to read. Regards, Bill |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you for this treasure, Sy! I'll try it tonight. *smiles*.....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...sounds like magic!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ If I am yours than you are mine, treasure that is.  aziza Thank you for the like and reply. Mysteria I knew you could.  Dublin Boy As is the pleasure of your reply. iliana Lots of luck my friend. LOL Thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Open up your minds brochure Leave a passage to endure" definitely a trip I want to take Sir Sy... beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady LOL transportation can be arranged. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A little bit of mental magic. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magic? Did you say magic?  That sure is one way to capture my attention Sy! But then, you only have to post an exquisite piece such as this... and you have captured ME! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy,  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Colourful, rythmic and well penned, this was an enjoyable read Sy..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose My pleasure, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a treasure i have deeply missed My spirit will rise |
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