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sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 2006-09-11 11:10 PM


A Rose By Night

Softly bathed in pale moonlight
I came to greet a rose by night
Delicate was this blossom fair
That spread her perfume through the air

So captivated by her charms
For want to hold her in my arms
But passing through the shadows deep
This love I saw I could not keep

Another held my lovely rose
As the moonlight sadly did expose
Tight and warm was their embrace
As tears of heartbreak streaked my face

This is my soul of ice cold fire
That burns with rage and sweet desire
Crumbled fragments of heart remain
Shattered dreams and endless pain

I’ll tell it to the nightingale
So it can sing the woeful tale
Of how true love was lost from sight
When I came to greet a rose by night



© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
openthoughts
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 94
Where the child can be free
1 posted 2006-09-12 11:35 PM


I particularly loved the structure of this poem.  I feel it flows very nicely

accompanied by beautiful use of words.  I love this poem

sewasham
Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
2 posted 2006-09-12 11:36 PM


Thank you for the kind words, I appreciate it. Take care and Have fun. Steve


The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-09-12 11:44 PM




sigh...
you sure can write love Steve

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2006-09-15 01:06 PM


The ache of the moonlight was as dew.
Emotionally rich, both in color and contrast.
TD

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
5 posted 2006-09-15 03:12 PM


I always loved your poetry.  This is no exception.  I love roses, too..you catch their heady sweetness perfectly in this romantic touch of velvet.

~ Klassy  

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2006-09-16 09:46 PM




Not all roses
shall leave the frame
of any man
who knows its name....


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