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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2006-09-11 11:14 AM


Ever feel me thinking of you?
Or sense a hovering round the vapor of dreams
to steal a glimpse?
Do forgive if you find me, and unaware
that softer words would have gone unnoticed
(passion for you is impossible to veil!)
Yet here I am, ethereal
fearful that if you ever do for man
what in dreams you do for me
I am lost

© Copyright 2006 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-11 11:34 AM



This is very lovely, Robert.


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-09-11 04:41 PM


Nice writing...James
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2006-09-11 05:48 PM


hot stuff
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-11 10:09 PM




"fearful that if you ever do for man
what in dreams you do for me
I am lost"

oh my gosh Robert
I love it...

aziza
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5 posted 2006-09-13 01:56 AM


You took my train of thoguht away as I kind of went off on a day dream of your poem.  It captured me.  

aziza

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6 posted 2006-09-13 01:30 PM


A beautiful piece Robert...so full of longing.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

cbautista
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7 posted 2006-09-13 03:36 PM


Reminds me of unrequited love.
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