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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-11 08:00 AM



bow bends behind the benz
round the day thirty time
when the white girl spends

her goldcard gamble gawdy
on the east coast garlic
of dominican candy blacks

in the backroom stacks
no reading in the dark
but touch with your hands

and smell the smooth rounds
sitting on bedroom comfortable
in the swallow browns

saucy slippery sounds
of a cognac's whisper
on pout mouth temptyoutation

before her eyes say melt me down


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daark

scribblenote:stogeyshow backroom ooze-zone

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2006-09-11 08:51 AM


cognacs whisper....

I do love when you whisper so early in the morning, what a sweet treat...to be melted to.     

g'morning, big guy...

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-09-11 10:45 AM


Your poetry calls to me to read it--and I am always gratified that I did.

aziza

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
3 posted 2006-09-11 12:58 PM


ms gs, thanks for the eyes lady friend


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ms az, thank you for the walk by, you smile me

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan
4 posted 2006-09-11 09:04 PM


Without fail, I am caught up in the net of your words. That would make you a fisher of Poets.

Sandra

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-09-11 09:57 PM




and her eyes surely do
say melt me down
Stranger...

smooth

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2006-09-12 07:31 AM


ms sandra, thank you for visiting the cove of pens ms


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ladyone, thanks for the vizzit to the den of handmades

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