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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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0 posted 2006-09-11 02:06 AM



She Loved Me in Her Dreams

In hearts of compassion I sought salvation
From those who promised love unconditional;
But too often I cried myself to sleep,
Until my tears ended and my heart hardened…

Sometimes you stare at the midnight skies
And grasp in your private thoughts the faintest of stars
Until the hopes of the soul freeze and then shatter,
Leaving splinters of memories and pain
Into the dreams of another’s reality…

I realized a heartbeat ago,
That when you awake with love in your heart,
And courageously absorb the hurt of the day before,
Then the future will greet you with an endless kiss,
Upon the lips of a beautiful bride to be.


Marcel


© Copyright 2006 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-09-11 04:12 PM


Some striking descriptions here Keith.
That's a WOW!
TD

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-09-11 04:14 PM


This is wonderful writing and a great read.  Bravo.....jo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-09-11 05:05 PM


Nice writing...James
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