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Open Poetry #39
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OdinsDottir
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since 2006-09-10
Posts 2
0 posted 2006-09-10 04:42 PM

I remember the way I felt...
The fear..
The pain..
The disappointment..
When I felt your fist against my face..
Your strong hands around my neck..
Beliving you would kill me this time...
Struggeling to breathe..
Hoping to survive...
Just one more time..
Passing out...
waking up pretending it never happened..
That it was just one more bad dream..
Hoping it was the last time..
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-09-11 10:16 PM

extremely powerful work
and so necessary...

welcome to Pip
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-09-13 10:25 AM

ms odie,
time to leave
or learn to fight
any lady deserves gentle

welcome home to pip
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