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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-09-10 09:33 AM


To the sunsets of an argument,
As my heart and futures sigh
There is nothing like the hurt that glistens in my eye


All I asked was to be left alone
But now I am left with this,
The decision that faces me,
The lemon, flowered dress


God has never asked a lot from me
And neither has my mum
But how can I forgive, when the hurt is all but done?


The scars have formed and my life has changed
Not for better but for worse
They have torched the soul that I had become
Changed the life, that became the inspiration to some


I stare longingly at the mirror, arms outstretched into the air
A body full of hate glares back at me in despair
The smell of burning flesh fills the air
Tears dry upon my face,
I see no bravery in my eyes anymore
Only sadness,
Only Sadness………………………………


© Copyright 2006 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
1 posted 2006-09-11 02:00 AM


very sad, and your pain can definitely be felt...but so can the warmth of the sun, that will greet you tomorrow...nicely written and expressed.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-09-11 10:13 PM



powerful work...

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
3 posted 2006-09-12 06:21 AM


Thankyou Both Very Much., It is always appriciated.
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