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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa

0 posted 2006-09-10 06:49 AM


Everything is in the pot coming to the boil
accepting of the aging and the wrinkling of flesh
except a little dream child struggling to get up
and a mother figure in comforting embrace.  

In rocking pose the mother asks,
“Who has left this little child?”
and she looks to the right
a woman awe inspired
at how from strife and turmoil
a child is birthed within  
and bonds immediately
with the figure that is “me”.

Two peas in a pod outside that boiling pot
protected from the heat of intolerable days
smile together at the giving and receiving
and too cry together at their invisibility.

There is music in the silent times,
silence in the chit, chat, chat,
and both together dance the dance
of two combined in solitude.

Mother/child within a dream
and I am there betwixt between
looking for the one I know ~
but the weave of bond too tight
and lesser mortals cannot fight
the child-like wonder birthing so
within the heart of older folk.

And there is no reason, so it seems
for life, for dreams, for boiling pots
that cook most everything to death
to release the mother/child in “me”!

Helen / 10 September 2006


© Copyright 2006 Helen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-09-10 07:02 AM


From one pea to another.....you certainly nailed this one!     Many hugs.....jo
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2006-09-10 07:06 AM


Hiya, "pea"!  Wanna break free?  
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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3 posted 2006-09-10 12:17 PM


Helen....and this is the hold...so well told!
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-09-11 12:12 PM




so well done Helen...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2006-09-11 02:37 AM


Martie and Kate - Thank you!  
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