»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #39
»
hard (charcoal man and his lady)
| Open Poetry #39 |
|
hard (charcoal man and his lady) |
|
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
|
mais down bayou smell of sawdust on midway music chirren running lady skips happy sunshine dress cotton candy fingers sticky holding her man’s hand lift me on horse let me ride ‘round red lip spreads to laugh milk teeth bared charcoal man lifts her on shiny black horse music sings ‘round and ‘round up and down happy goin’ same place she been last time legs holding tight to same moment desire down midway singsong man cry gar ici looky looky belles femmes dancin’ like you ain’ seen before snaky rise and fall charcoal man strolls eyes women in all color silk movin’ ways that say need more? come here fingers that cry make you long sweetin’ honey man eyes that speak places you never been charcoal man lifts lady down arms around his neck sweet smothering allons mouche a mielle honey bee you tired tucks lady in dream sheets make do-do sleep my shâ charcoal man lights cigar lifts Panama from nail walks near bayou think 'bout hard |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You know -- it's hard for a man to compete with a horse between a woman's thighs ... okay, I couldn't help but go there. Seriously, my heart kind of goes out to Charcoal Man -- He is trying so hard -- and He is just being pulled, isn't he. See, what you have done to me? I am so wrapped up here. Thank you. aziza |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Az said it very well.  |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovin' this series! |
||
|
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
So, what we have here is a dichotomy. My, my Lady! Where will go with this? I feel the need to offer a critique on your writing as I don't think I ever have. I love it. Now that I've done that...get back to work. That panama isn't going to stay hung for long now, and I know it!!! |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
horses are very nice Aziza oh yes… poor charcoal man is trying very hard but it’s his nature and he’s being pulled hard glad to see you wrapped up… she certainly did, Karilea…  Enchantress, thank you… what we have here is a dichotomy indeed Sandra… I don’t think the Panama will stay hung for long either thank you for your kind words… |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kate, this is a wonderful series.....you are so talented! *hugs*....jo |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you jo... hugs to you |
||
|
Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I haven't read all to this series yet, but you best believe, I will! awesome indeed! ~Sunkissed. |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Sunkissed... |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone I always dreamed of being a horsey and of being rode hard and put away wet anyway, enjoyed her godiva here |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hmmm Stranger… I see that horsey thing wasn’t nearly as subtle as I thought it was… thank you Godiva was a lady too |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James... |
||
|
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Still reading and still in awe. Love this series. martyjo |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you martyjo... |
||
|
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I'm really enjoying your little series. Very entertaining. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thanks Steve... |
||
Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love how we saw in his head and heart ... and hers too. Love that. I think that is what made this series so special for me. A |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
