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Free Falling
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Free Falling |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Free Falling I am less than I was yesterday, slowly coming undone as if I teeter on the brink of the highest ledge toes curling to regain purchase, arms out for balance you have seen me there, hair pushed back by the wind eyes wide and clear as if watching my soul fly free I stand straight, ready for the flight, the free fall to you Each day I am less than I was yesterday, but more yours aziza |
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riet Junior Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 19Australia |
This poem is very visual. It paints feelings with words. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you and welcomet to PiP. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"you have seen me there, hair pushed back by the wind eyes wide and clear as if watching my soul fly free" I have seen you aziza and I see you now... |
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