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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-09-08 04:49 PM


Evening sun peeks,
shinning through,
your evergreen branches.

Forever you stand tall,
strong, alive,
season throughout season.

You remain the same,
never changeing,
forever green.

I can trust you,
placing my security,
my life, in your hands.

For you will never leave me,
nor forsake me,
I look for you, you are there.

Faithful, true, never dying,
as all other trees do,
you live forever.

Forever green,
my tree of salvation,
the love of my life,

The father of creation,
the love of Jesus Christ,
your love is evergreen.

You are the pine tree,
my favorite tree,
tallest tree inside
the forest of my heart.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-09-2006 03:28 PM).]

© Copyright 2006 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-09-08 07:36 PM


Enjoyed...James
sandgrain
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2 posted 2006-09-08 08:36 PM


I enjoyed this.  You missed an 'r' in the title.

    Rae

FNG
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3 posted 2006-09-08 11:28 PM


"You are the pine tree,
my favorite tree,
tallest tree inside
the forest of my heart."

My favourite here, among the rest.

enjoyed.

CastleGuard
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4 posted 2006-09-11 02:45 AM



Nicely done, ARH, I love trees immensely - they are the breath we take.

CG

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5 posted 2006-09-11 07:47 AM



MzRomanticHeart~

BEAUTIMOUS !!!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Goldenrose
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6 posted 2006-09-13 07:20 PM


Sounds like you are describing the Yew tree? But so well thought out through metaphor, thank you for this poem...

Goldenrose.

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