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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-08 07:55 AM

lady sun always did prefer
the leather men's attention
over the button boys with laws

or at least she blessed their roads
with her bare bosom mornings
for eastern hours of bold golden

and then again in afternoons
knowing they had been drinking
and would make their vulgar talk

about her always going down
on the tumid ends of mountains
and the free and easy temptation

or her improper hemline horizon

_____________

daark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-09-08 08:53 AM

Having started my borrowed tenure of time
looking toward the golden hills
where the fog would lay its night dreams

having shifted the hanging moss skirts
and sat near the creek's passings
to welcome such mornings

it is enough to say
you've made me hunger
for home again.

And I thank you
for that.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-09-08 09:43 AM

DS...I hear morning more than see it, so enjoyed the gold of your sun words.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2006-09-08 10:01 AM

ms sun, thank you golden one for the review

__________

ms martie, thanks lil neighbor..you bless me

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-09-08 04:43 PM

exquisite morning picture Stranger...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-09-08 04:50 PM

Mmmm, wish I could see mornings through your eyes Dark.
~Hugs, E~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-09-08 04:59 PM

oh if the world could only but see through your eyes, what a much better place that it would be.

Loved the touch of golden sun in this Dark.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

7 posted 2006-09-08 11:27 PM

I've decided it's not just how you word what you express, but how your view is shifted to give even the most normal situation a daark twist. That is not to say the twist is dark, but rather, just daark.
Have I confused you? I have myself.
All I know is, I do so love your words!

Done!
Sandra

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