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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-09-07 11:02 PM


Sleepy Fringe On A Full Moon

Ghostly, the reflection of my wandering mind
Perfectly round, in the glow of an afterthought
More intent my vision, more blurred the edges
So fixed upon the shape of an answer in a bubble
The darkness consumed all but the light
Melting, it seemed, into soft strands of furry fringe

Out of reach, to clear the fray
Out of touch, the words at play

Reaching out, the adjustment of simple time
Rise and set, lidded sphere, in this truth of mine

Yet to harvest, I raise my glasses, and see clear

Copyright Kkh 9/7/06


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 2006-09-07 11:06 PM



"Yet to harvest, I raise my glasses, and see clear"

delightful TD...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2006-09-08 12:59 PM


"soft strands of furry fringe"

Wish I'd come up with that phrase.  I do love your writing, Kathleen.  *hugs*....jo

Martie
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3 posted 2006-09-08 09:45 AM


TD

"The darkness consumed all but the light"  Your writing is so unique and gorgeous...love this!  

marcel
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4 posted 2006-09-11 01:53 AM


blurred is not the beauty of your heart...
sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
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5 posted 2006-09-11 11:50 PM


Such wonderful words choices. Your descriptions are beautifully done. Very nice. Take care and Have fun. Steve


aziza
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6 posted 2006-09-13 01:52 AM


I think this is beautiful perfection.

aziza

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2006-09-13 04:45 AM


This was enjoyable to read, and an insight to your work, thank you..

Goldenrose.

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