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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-09-07 04:59 PM


A continuum,
never-ending,
unbending,
transcending,
in perpetuum.

Indifferent
to the pleas,
to the comings and the goings,
the to-ings and the fro-ings,
of tiny human fleas.

Vast,
beyond the ken,
the understanding
or commanding
of mortal men.

And still
we strive
to make our mark
upon the dark--
to be alive!

© Copyright 2006 Bill Fitzsimons - All Rights Reserved
FNG
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1 posted 2006-09-08 11:05 PM


How wonderful the universe...we are but fleas..lolx

Greatly enjoyed.

Dublin Boy
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2 posted 2006-09-09 04:27 AM


Thank you, FNG, for your reply--greatly appreciated.

Cheers,
Bill

Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2006-09-09 01:15 PM


Such a large creation is thought--
more than "our ken or... commanding."

Such big eyes you have.  



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4 posted 2006-09-09 01:43 PM


I like this very much.  So concise and true.  Joyce
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-09-12 05:54 PM


You think big! ~ You write great!

Universal Love & Light,
EA




Martie
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6 posted 2006-09-12 06:14 PM


Dublin Boy

It is beyond what we imagine big can be...well expressed.  

Enchantress
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7 posted 2006-09-12 06:41 PM


Very well done and much enjoyed Bill.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

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