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Burnt Beyond Mending... |
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BloodyEclipse Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16 |
The eruption of my heart’s haze Fizzles Symbolic of love and kill rage Once full of emotion’s ripe will Now it’s myriad madness Stuck in red dementia Breeds The darkest eclipse Shedding over with blood The memory of beauty Now ashes Burnt beyond mending… Upon the heart of a wingless angel Like a heavy burden A brick is lodged into his chest Staggering He steps towards the next trying moment… Destiny revealed in a useless dream Where nothing ever has meaning |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Upon the heart of a wingless angel Like a heavy burden A brick is lodged into his chest" hard hitting write BE enjoyed it... welcome |
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jwebs Junior Member
since 2006-08-15
Posts 25Ft Hood, TX |
"the memory of beauty now ashes" powerful sense of futility in those words. they stick in my mind as I remember all the times I've been there. Great wordplay throughout and I like how the title conveys the same overall feeling of the poem itself and draws people in. good job. No one is more professional than I. I am a Noncommissioned Officer, a leader of soldiers. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! A very powerful entrance post here. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And what does have meaning? Interesting first post! Welcome to the place! |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
nice |
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