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Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2006-09-07 03:52 PM


It follows that a red or yellow
will take its fellow's plunge
and pull another tear from my eye.

To raise the pile, a simple Fall.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

© Copyright 2006 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-09-07 05:53 PM


Are the leaves already beginning to fall, or have you just lost a friend?

iliana
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2 posted 2006-09-07 07:13 PM


Good to see you here.  Autumn comes but not very strongly where I live.  Liked this a bunch as it made me think of home in the midwest in Fall.  
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3 posted 2006-09-14 01:45 AM


a simple and beautiful image...thats why I like this

This time of the year and its memories can also take its toll...

luv your writing, Luv

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

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4 posted 2006-09-14 10:43 PM



nice touch of fall...


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