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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-09-07 02:48 PM


very long time and it's my first poem in absolute ages lol well it's not about me i just have been doing so much and under the influence of an african girl who's only 11 came here as a refugee i've just been studying her life in my spare time and this poem isn't even a scratch on the surface of what she has bee through and it is  certinly not my best lol but it came frm the heart so with out further a due lol...

Tears dripping down my face
What a mock this is of a place

And I thought I could trust you
I guess it’s not so easy

Taking a deep breath
But then you just come back to me

And tears start dripping down my face
Again
All those memories, such awful memories
Still haven’t healed the scar…
U left on my heart

And I reminisce of those times, those horrible times
Again
And I go back to the time, where I was nothing but a slave
Again
And I go back to the ruthless person I was subjected too
Again
And nemore I am not in the mood

To be a...

Slave to your love
Slave to your existence
Slave to you time
Slave to your happiness

A slave is what I’ve become

And. and I think to myself
What have I become
Who am I now?
What am I worth?
How did I get here?
When did everything start to…
Start to, Fall apart..?

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-09-08 04:11 PM


understanding your feelings, you have conveyed them with a well written poem!

~ARH

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

2 posted 2006-09-08 11:17 PM


You will heal...sad to go through this.

Push it away, again and again, someday it will fade.

until you don't feel like a slave to anyone.

been there.

hugs
FNG

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