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-Moonlight Magic- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Magic~ in the mystic moonlight from dolphin's mouth crystal waters arch - moonbeams dance in silver ripples under a canopy of lilac blossoms.. a bench invites romance ~ glow-worms between branches flicker their little lanterns in a ceremonial dance. Hands move gently - voices whisper lips discover love's sweet mead hearts in joyous rhythm beat passion grasps with hungry arms captive love in fierce embrace. Hide not your mystic face pale moon dawn's victory comes all too soon. ~For Marge, knowing she will love tonight's full moon~ . |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
enjoyed-particularly the last 2 lines arthur |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful visions , enchanting and magical Hope |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Omg! lol i love it, it's absoloutly fantastic and the picture it creates in ones mind is truly beautiful and one only someone so talented could help create. i'm looking for you...always... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Delightful, Nancy! The moon suits your muse! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
moonbeamy dreamy I love it... |
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BloodyEclipse Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16 |
I love you... The images you put in my mind Beautiful This honestly inspired me |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lately, for some unknown reason, I've become partial to "stage" magic....making red hankies disappear "here and there"...wonder why?...... Nice write red... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Full moon eh Nancy? Sure does xplain alot of goings on around here. lol.. Seriously hon, I adore Lady Luna and I love this fantastic write. Nicely penned sweetie. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very pretty one, Nancy Lee. *smiles*...jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you for the lovely respite. I just mentally sat and rested for a while. martyjo |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful imagery in this poem Tinker!! I hope Marge is please to see you dedicated it to her. Well done!!!!!!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
magical... thank you for the beautiful imagery  |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great write!  "hearts in joyous rhythm beat" The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~Thank you all for your kind replies~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...I didn't have water to reflect it, just telephone wires to disect it. Lovely poem!  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nancy - your poem does wonderful justice to the beauty of the moon I saw last night - lovely poetry - Paul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ I DO LOVE THIS !!! I was otherwise busy RESTING from the 'grilling' ... *whew* (took your advice and did my 'rest up') ...  but will be on-the-prowl for that glow~ This is just sooooo beautiful ... you did her up real purty~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge-Of-The-Moon*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A great "lovescape." There is something about the moonlight mixed with dark that touches us all. Good job! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A beautifully romantic piece of writing. Such lovely descriptions created wonderful imagery. Great work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario |
WOW all i can say is WOW I back ..... just was looking in the Relflections on the web book and had to come back for a visit.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you all once again.... And Wilfred? Great to see you!! |
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