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arwen54
Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13
Welland, Ontario

0 posted 2006-09-07 11:51 AM


I should have known it - how could I tell
There'd be someone else as well -
Not just me, your friend with the smile
Who would rescue you from the darkness once in a while
When you might have felt the need.
You planted the very first seed
Of my burning desire
And I let myself get mesmerized by your fire.

I was like putty in your hands...
Oh, I remember those artist's hands -
They caressed and they teased
And they liked to please -
And they did.
And you did.

©1995-2006 Karen Blundell(aka arwen54)
http://karenblundell.com

© Copyright 2006 Karen Blundell - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-09-07 12:01 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS KAREN!
A most beautiful entrance piece you have presented us with.
I see you are from Ontario also..
you will find quite a few of us are also.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
I know you will enjoy your stay here at Passions.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy-in Ontario~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
2 posted 2006-09-07 12:13 PM


Welcome Karen. Very nice indeed. I really enjoyed this
Now I'll have to check out how to enter your contest
Thanks

Rich

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2006-09-07 02:39 PM


Karen~
Welcome to PiP ... an evergrowing circle of true poetic friendships~

It is a pleasure to have you on board~

Having been, at different times, both the potter and the putty ...
I can feel the all of this piece~

Looking forward to seeing you share even more with us~

Thanks for joining~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
4 posted 2006-09-07 03:04 PM


i love it, yay welcome lol
Nikerlz
Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37
California
5 posted 2006-09-07 03:17 PM


Have you ever seen the movie Ghost?  With Patrick Swayze?  Lol...  Welcome!

BK

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-09-07 04:29 PM




"They caressed and they teased
And they liked to please -
And they did.
And you did."

yes
lovely work Karen...
welcome


BloodyEclipse
Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16

7 posted 2006-09-07 04:40 PM


Pain and pleasure pulls us into it's void...
I hate these moments in life...
You depicted it well

Dublin Boy
Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102
UK
8 posted 2006-09-07 04:41 PM


Excellent piece, Karen--A pleasure to read a well-written poem such as this.
Cheers,
Bill

arwen54
Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13
Welland, Ontario
9 posted 2006-09-07 08:56 PM


thanks everyone...

I already feel like I'm home...


Rich, I've decided to hold off on the contest for now...you can contact me off forum for more info, if you like.

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