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Open Poetry #39

tinbowl gin cravy

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-07 07:35 AM

when kandy brings her cravin's down
in the saucy bucket shivery
she calls the hounds to hungry

with her shoofly wiggle-on
she dinners at the tinbowl house
with the stuffy sleeve captain

and his chrome on her dollar gal

wears her bayou dope pretty smell
makes ol captain have the urges
for fiddle-re and squeezebox

makes him mess up the statues
with two shoe twirl and sashay
she speaks creole at the mirrors

makes the dollar girl dizzy
gives her the belly ache spell
then heals ol captain's stiffy

and gives his sleeves the wrinkle-ons
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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-07-2006 10:34 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-09-07 11:01 AM

oh so many images and visions I drew from this. Through your eyes, feeding the dog
seems like a wanted task, instead of just another chore.
*warm smuggy hugs*