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FNG
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0 posted 2006-09-07 03:52 AM



                     Noodle,
                 Oriental Worm.
               gushing into a hole.
         wiggling with a splish splash splosh,
    of hot slimy trails ooshing split splat splot!
          What a display of final fought!
              Ended up a mushed blob.
                  Squeeshy squashy,
                     Noodle.
              

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-09-07 06:35 AM


ok, when we were little, my brother teased me by telling me spagetti with sauce were worms....thankfully I had forgotten that, ohhhh perhaps 2 years ago...and now this...well THANKS A LOT...hehehe, I'm back in the saddle again....or should I say, back to eating noodles with EVO, butter and garlic

FNG
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2 posted 2006-09-08 12:49 PM


Isn't it nice to go back into childhood memories...glad it brought back yours

Noodles, cook it in anyway. Enjoy it so much. YUmyum...lolx

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