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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610


0 posted 2006-09-07 12:08 PM



if I believe in miracles
promise you and I can fly
would you trust me and let go?
I'd never let you fall
soaring high 'bove clouds
they cannot see
above the walls they build
to capture souls like you
and me
to trap us from the wind
I'll always be your friend...

If I could love beyond these
years to bridge the gap and
stay your tears
that bind to age old rules
proclaiming we are fools
if I could shield you from
the rain
quiet fire of your pain
would you follow me back home?
you'll never be alone...

Go, my love, go your way
to some long forgotten place
where sighs become a breeze
I'll follow where you lead
I will follow you
spread the wings that courage gave
please be strong my love, be brave
you're always in my heart
you have been from the start

echoe's from a distant past
have come to hurt us both so fast
but if i sing my songs
will it right all of our wrongs?

I shall be hollow without you
so hollow without you
oh, the way's you've lifted me
written down in history
always you shall have my love
always have and hold my love
just trust as you let go
I truly loved you so

I'll always love you so...

~Sunkissed.
11/99

© Copyright 2006 R. T. M. - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2006-09-07 02:03 AM


Such a beautiful heartfelt write!  Love is certainly something to hold onto - forever!  Life just makes it a bit difficult.  Enjoyed!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-09-07 08:45 AM


Oh such a beautiful heartfelt write!
I so much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-09-07 09:21 AM



It's been a long while
since I've last read some
of your poetry.

Welcome home.

It's good to see you again.




Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2006-09-07 10:00 AM


Beautiful writing. Nice to read your words again.
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since 2001-03-07
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5 posted 2006-09-07 12:28 PM


Indeed a treat for the mind, and very nice to see you back writing.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-09-08 04:46 PM




I have not read you before
but I will now...
I felt your heart beat in these lines...

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

7 posted 2006-09-08 11:59 PM


Sweet!
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