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she wants something (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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‘neath a mimosa
head in his lap
sun warm on legs
cotton skimpy tucked high
lady plays pareses
lazy
tickle charcoal man lip
with grass
kiss me

he chuckles
   gate' pourri pischouette
   you spoiled little girl

his lips touch hers
the sea flows in her mouth
waves move her
low pull of pleasure

    happy
    ma poupée?

no
red lip bends to pout

    ahhh beb
    now what?

want to play madame
make trousseau
want my man home
promise me

charcoal man looks away
another road
laughin’ faces
red purple skirts
different warm  
charcoal man takes off Panama
scratches head
cigar just don’t taste right
somehow
© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-06-2006 11:44 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

this must be published
altogether some day
please

you have a winner here, m'lady
The Lady
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Kacy
thank you...
smile

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 09-07-2006 07:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ladyone...it was the lipstick she was wearing..makes the cubano too sweet...now if she were to bite off the end and say try it now poppieman...or perhaps take up thigh rollin some good dominican leaf...

as usual enjoyed her horsyround girlwoman
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uh-oh...wonder what's going to happen
to those high-steppin' expectations...



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I don't think this looks real optimitic. Ultimatums just never seem to work out. little lady should remember  

soyez reconnaissant pour ce qui est actuel

be grateful for what is at hand.

And I do agree, this needs to be published as one complete work.

Sandra
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I am SO much enjoying this series!!!!!!!
Hugs dear Lady.

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

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Lady, I'm lovin' your southern lovin' series!

I agree with Kacy re publishing them all together!


Linda
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darn those men when they want to be rascals like that...   

Lovely, Kate!
The Lady
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Stranger
could be her lipstick
but I will suggest that thigh rolling to her
never can tell
she does ‘bout anything he wants…
thank you

oh Karilea
I think the lady’s bit off more than she can chew
so to speak…
he looks like a hard dog to keep on the porch, yea?

ah Sandra
little lady should remember that
but love wants what it wants  
and the little lady seems to be tete dure
a mite hard headed…
thank you

thank you Enchantress
hugs to you…

thank you Linda…

that’s right Gentle Spirit  
darn ‘em and love ‘em too, huh?  
thank you

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Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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thank you James...

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I missed them so.
The Lady
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they have missed you too...


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14 posted 03-27-2011 01:14 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

He just can't make that promise.  Some things are tied up neatly with a bow ~ and our charcoal man can't give more than he already has.  Part of me thinks, "Poor lady."  and part of me is jealous of her.

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