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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-09-06 11:36 PM




‘neath a mimosa
head in his lap
sun warm on legs
cotton skimpy tucked high
lady plays pareses
lazy
tickle charcoal man lip
with grass
kiss me

he chuckles
   gate' pourri pischouette
   you spoiled little girl

his lips touch hers
the sea flows in her mouth
waves move her
low pull of pleasure

    happy
    ma poupée?

no
red lip bends to pout

    ahhh beb
    now what?

want to play madame
make trousseau
want my man home
promise me

charcoal man looks away
another road
laughin’ faces
red purple skirts
different warm  
charcoal man takes off Panama
scratches head
cigar just don’t taste right
somehow

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-09-06 11:44 PM


this must be published
altogether some day
please

you have a winner here, m'lady

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-09-06 11:48 PM



Kacy
thank you...
smile


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-09-07 07:15 AM


ladyone...it was the lipstick she was wearing..makes the cubano too sweet...now if she were to bite off the end and say try it now poppieman...or perhaps take up thigh rollin some good dominican leaf...

as usual enjoyed her horsyround girlwoman

Sunshine
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4 posted 2006-09-07 08:49 AM



uh-oh...wonder what's going to happen
to those high-steppin' expectations...




seraphin
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5 posted 2006-09-07 02:08 PM


I don't think this looks real optimitic. Ultimatums just never seem to work out. little lady should remember  

soyez reconnaissant pour ce qui est actuel

be grateful for what is at hand.

And I do agree, this needs to be published as one complete work.

Sandra

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6 posted 2006-09-07 02:15 PM


I am SO much enjoying this series!!!!!!!
Hugs dear Lady.

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-09-07 02:33 PM


Lady, I'm lovin' your southern lovin' series!

I agree with Kacy re publishing them all together!


Linda

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8 posted 2006-09-07 02:50 PM


darn those men when they want to be rascals like that...   

Lovely, Kate!

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-09-07 04:02 PM





Stranger
could be her lipstick
but I will suggest that thigh rolling to her
never can tell
she does ‘bout anything he wants…
thank you

oh Karilea
I think the lady’s bit off more than she can chew
so to speak…
he looks like a hard dog to keep on the porch, yea?

ah Sandra
little lady should remember that
but love wants what it wants  
and the little lady seems to be tete dure
a mite hard headed…
thank you

thank you Enchantress
hugs to you…

thank you Linda…

that’s right Gentle Spirit  
darn ‘em and love ‘em too, huh?  
thank you


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-09-07 06:02 PM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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11 posted 2006-09-07 06:05 PM




thank you James...


aziza
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12 posted 2006-09-09 02:59 AM


I missed them so.

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-09-09 03:15 AM



they have missed you too...



Alison
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14 posted 2011-03-27 01:14 AM


He just can't make that promise.  Some things are tied up neatly with a bow ~ and our charcoal man can't give more than he already has.  Part of me thinks, "Poor lady."  and part of me is jealous of her.

A

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