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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2006-09-06 08:32 PM


My offer of love is wild and free
as waves rolling on a shore:
will you let it drift upon
your sad and empty shore?

My tears for you are like the rain:
would you let them
wash your life of bitterness today?
My eyes are as the sun’s rays,
filled with joy in your presence:
will you let them fill your heart
with hope?

Will you let the sun and the rain
together create
your own unique rainbow?
Will you let my love
fill your dreams
with the brightest colours?
Will you let me love you?

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-09-06 08:56 PM


Magical questions...

Enjoyed your rainbow.
TD

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2006-09-06 09:53 PM


Oh my! How could the answer be anything less than "yes"? Just beautiful.

Sandra

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-09-06 11:58 PM



oh my yes...
lovely


Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2006-09-07 02:08 AM


Yes, lovely indeed, WindWalker.  Sometimes it's not so much a question of loving but allowing ourselves to be loved but it must of course lead to the loving for it to be lasting.
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