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Dawning
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Dawning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Blue gray smoke obscures View shrouded in mystery Light shimmers at edge. Whispers of morning Dawn of new day bringing change Sun rises to shine. Butterfly breaks free Rebirth, awakening soul Soaring through new skies. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the new eye day is always lovely ms enjoyed this |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
amazing images Gentle Spirit... |
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Kal525 Junior Member
since 2005-12-20
Posts 26 |
Nicely done. Your use of imagery leaves the interpretation and formation of the actual story up to the reader, yet at the same time is not haphazardly thrown together. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A little piece of poetic perfection! So spiritual! So natural! ~ So beautiful! May all your dawns be full of Light!   Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
rejoice....what a way to celebrate... hugs to ya kiddo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and the dawn births the butterfly night sheds its veil the bride of morning steps softly |
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