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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there distant rolls the gypsy nickel spins her shimmer troll of tempt pretending invisible behind her dawn but my hands know her sinful sling o' how they wear the warm like the gloving of a wallow the swallowing of tomorrows parch when the throat is a voiceless poem my pen is but nudity for her mind and she disrobes with wanton yawns dragging the ink zippery with tooth and nailing down the skinend fray lest it blow away shirtsleeve lost needing more to cover than her eyes when she corks her face into my vase and mouths the moments of spending time ______________ daark |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Oh Dark. I imagine your mind to be draped. A thousand small windows holding vast oceans of images. Do tell, Sir. Do you merely draw back a drape, and allow the wonder to pour forth from your fingertips? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra...no, but was walking by the marina and fell in...lots of stuff under there..(grin) thanks hon for the eyes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and this is you, all wet?  Sound wondering sounds here... and very like some sea spray... well done, Sir. Always leaving behind tanfastic images.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Could envision the sun in slow rise around you this morning D. Oh but, what a temptress she is though huh? Enjoyed the visions through your eyes this morn, you bring such perception with your dark stranger thoughts. *warm hugs* seek the flame within yourself |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno D? Your poetry is so absolutely beautiful that there are times I wish you were a priest. If you could move the soul of all mankind the way you maneuver the average woman's behind in her chair, I do believe you could change the world.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh, and by the way? You had me at "lucid".  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend for walking by _______________ ms gs, thank you for lifting the shade and letting the morning in ms _______________ ms serene, may I just start with you..perhaps the world will follow the priestess sway? ps, was hoping lucid would...well you know..thanks lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sounds like you fell all the way in Stranger it's about those wanton yawns and the skinend fray whew... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..yep..and and..them pine needles on the sidewalk at a turn too..and the burned out light..and...thanks |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
DS, With your permission I will pause here too. There is no doubt in my mind your concepts and creative talent are unique. There was a time I would not read others' works at all for fear of not developing my own style, fortunately that has now passed. A snippet here, a concept there, Nah, I'm only kiddin'! Doc |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
"The road to success is not straight, there is a kerb called failure, a loop called confusion, speed-bumps called friends, and red-lights called enemies. Caution-signs called family, and flat-tires called jobs...but if you have a spear called determination, and a engine called perseverance, with insurance called fate, and the drive to make it, you'll meet a place called success." Cham, 'Rude Boy Pledge'. Excuse me for an apparently random quote, Dark Stranger, but your poem makes me want to write a 'Rude Girl Pledge'. Inspiring Real 'G youth don't fear police cars. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It is only through making our way through, adding redirects, here and there, that poetential hitches us to the future, plenty of new miles, with recommendations to help figure out od odities that we soon appreciate...giving us the heads up for some pretty amazing experiences....shall we call it "eating the soul food of good health and fitness" wishing you a writer's life with much inspiration...you are a song of literature |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend Doc, thanks for the review of my humble grind ______________ ms kif, would enjoy your view of the pledge, thanks for the walk by ______________ ms leej, slow hugs lady friend, this was just a study of a bay in juxtapose with some other antics..today is another day with a thousand highways for the old iron to run |
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