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quiet in the bayou (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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0 posted 09-06-2006 12:17 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


dark night
no moon
ouaouaron making big croak
in bayou
screen door slip open
quiet like

shined leather feet slide on floor
cigar smoke
patchouli fill empty room
lady’s heart listens

dream sheet slips back
bed creaks
long legs creep in
‘tween hers  
brown fingers tangle in shadow hair

   miss me
   ma petite fille vilaine

lady sighs
‘gator roars
charcoal man slips lady
little gris gris

um hum

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 09-06-2006 12:18 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



Sandra
this one's for you...

seraphin
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2 posted 09-06-2006 03:07 AM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

Awwww! I'm almost glad to be awake at 3:00 am.
This is so nice, the thought and the tale! Thank you!!

Sandra
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um-hummmm....

yes, that's about saying
it all.



Dark Stranger
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4 posted 09-06-2006 07:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

lady one
when ol snakey does his mojo
they say it makes the belly water boil
makes the shiver skin giggle

they say..dunno myselftho

enjoyed it ms
The Lady
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thank you Robert    

glad you enjoyed it Sandra  

thank you Karilea    

"dunno myselftho"
um hum  
Stranger
a real stranger might believe you…
    
thank you...

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!


6 posted 09-23-2006 05:32 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

I missed one in my absence and just found it!  It's like finding the last candy bar and just cherishing each sweet bite.  My day is now more happy.  I love them and miss them, you know.

aziza
The Lady
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I'm glad you found it
aziza
I miss them badly...
and I wonder how they're doing
thank you

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Somewhere in time~


8 posted 09-23-2006 08:39 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

I am SO hopeful we have not heard the end of them.
Mayhaps a sequel?
Yes?
The Lady
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9 posted 09-23-2006 08:41 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


they still wander through
sometimes Nancy
but they haven't spoken yet...
I hope
thank you

passing shadows
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well drat! I have gotten behind on this series since I left for Kansas so I will have to go through and get them all in order so I can maybe print them out to read when I'm away from the computer...

that's a good thought yaknow? Make all of these into a book!! I'd sure buy one!
The Lady
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thank you passing shadows
good to see you back …
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12 posted 09-24-2006 07:36 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

I don't believe DS any more than you.
Well done Lady..a picturesque poem you
gave us.
The Lady
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I don't believe DS any more than you

that's because you're not a stranger Barry

thank you so much...
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smiling and thinking
about belly shivers
gris gris
The Lady
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15 posted 09-24-2006 11:42 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady

makes me smile too Kacy

thanks..

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I miss them.

um hum.
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