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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-09-05 04:35 PM

Slow like molasses
the days pass
when I am stuck
not here
or there

I am left with a feeling
of being no where

When life is moving
surrounding me
the tick of clock
is all I see

reminding me...

I look back
see the footprints
I've left behind
and sometimes I still
don't even know
where I've been
or where I've yet to go;

and I try
not to carry to much baggage
along with me
because there is still so much
I've yet to see

and sometimes
you just have to

let bygones be..

Carrying that extra weight
is something I don't need
and I know that the future
is only what I allow myself
to conceive

I know in my heart
that I must follow my dreams
down whichever path
that it might lead

some days I’m not sure
of where that will be

as I face the unknown,

these things I've yet to see.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-09-05 05:23 PM

ms gs...walk on tiptoes
in the warm water
let everything else
float away

you only need the night sky
and dreams

enjoyed your work here

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-09-05 05:26 PM

I think we're always given enough time to get where we have to be - sometimes we're even there already without knowing it. I'm sure many can relate to the mix of confusion and determination expressed so well. Enjoyed!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-09-05 05:27 PM

"I know in my heart
that I must follow my dreams
down whichever path
that it might lead

some days I’m not sure
of where that will be

as I face the unknown,

these things I've yet to see."

Yes..so much more yet to see...
Wonderful write sweet Donna.
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2006-09-05 05:30 PM

We've all been there--Stuck on Life's Hold, somewhat wondering how we got there and most surely wondering just where it is all heading--or did we take a wrong turn somewhere?

A good reflective, contemplative read!

David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2006-09-05 05:36 PM

Hey Dark?

thanks big guy...

always m'friend, you have the right words.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-09-05 10:30 PM

It's that warm water
that will melt the molasses...

trust him
trust me.

It is all about
chemistry.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-09-05 11:09 PM

"and sometimes
you just have to

let bygones be.."

so true Gentle Spirit
so well done...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-09-06 12:47 PM

Feel like I'm looking over your shoulder while you're writing in your diary, Donna. I love honest writing. *hugs*....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2006-12-14 04:40 PM

yes!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2006-12-14 05:06 PM

When you know you have to follow the dream whereever it goes, then you know it all. I like the feel of this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2006-12-15 11:18 AM

just follow your dreams
let them lead you where ever
your heart will follow

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

12 posted 2006-12-17 02:24 AM

wonderfully expressed - enjoyed! RDB

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2006-12-18 05:36 PM

And you will as your thoughts turn into choices and actions...create well...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

14 posted 2006-12-19 12:03 PM

ooh just me had to come back for another read... such wonderful words! RDB

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2006-12-19 07:51 AM

Dearest Poet, allow each day to just be...don't fret about what is to be, it will come to you....you are indeed a gentle spirit and a very kind lady....exceptional writing....thank you

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

16 posted 2006-12-19 08:15 PM

Ah, my friend, have missed your words while I was away...loved this...

jwesley

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