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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-09-05 03:33 PM


Someday
I'll fashion dreams out of cobwebs,
tame a storm's temper tantrums,
lasso a passing comet
and pen a poem which shouts
all the languages of the universe.
I'll ride the ocean swells,
peer over the edge of Creation
and listen to an angel cry.
I will do all of those things--
someday.

© Copyright 2006 Bill Fitzsimons - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-09-05 04:16 PM


Absolutely beautiful writing!
I felt I was swept up into a dream
with your wonderful imagery.

Once again I say, Welcome to Passions!!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-09-05 05:14 PM


Yes, Bill, I believe you will - we all will "someday".  Remember - what the mind can perceive, it can achieve.  Enjoyed your words!
deleeme
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3 posted 2006-09-05 05:36 PM


Good poem- like they say if we don't aim big, we'll surely not get to where we'd like to get-do and accomplish anywhere close to what we want to achieve.
Aim Tall-Stand Tall,and Apologize-NOT AT ALL!

Enjoyed your expression of Lofty Ambitions,

  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-09-05 05:41 PM


Dublin Boy
Well here is mud in your eye. LOL

Dublin Boy
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5 posted 2006-09-05 06:36 PM


Thanks, everyone, for responding favourably to this one. I very much appreciate your comments.
Regards,
Bill

seraphin
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6 posted 2006-09-05 11:26 PM


"Fashion dreams out of cobwebs"

That is one wonderful line, followed by many more. This is positively dreamy!!

Sandra

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-09-06 12:24 PM




beautifully done Bill...


Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-09-06 12:33 PM


Everything begins with a thought.  I loved this little kaleidoscope of big imaginings.  Who know?  

~ Klassy

Dublin Boy
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9 posted 2006-09-06 10:40 AM


Thank you, Seraphin, Lady and Klassy for your kind comments. Maybe we'll all achieve greatness someday--as Klassy says, who knows?

Cheers,
Bill

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-09-08 07:32 PM


Create your world and live in it...James
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11 posted 2006-09-09 05:00 PM


This is such a hopeful poem. I
enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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