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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-05 08:01 AM



the bayou speaks secrets
bout a lady in the pretty up
before the morning has color

how she makes them sounds
with her mouth smiles
like a woman word special

mojo left candy under the sun
she sips the dark water conjur
and slips her day dreamery on

wearing the north wind grigri
and touching a blind man's eyes
before saint barbie yawns

she sways the whisper speak vela


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daark



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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-09-05 08:05 AM


I was wondering when you would be back to float my mind a wee bit. You were worth the wait.

Sandra

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-09-05 08:08 AM


ms sandra..thanks lady friend..when with the wind it always returns one they say.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-09-05 09:51 PM




Stranger
you know that old song...

"Well if you see my lttle red rooster
Please drive him home
Ain't been no peace in the barnyard
Since my little red rooster's been gone"

welcome home

and I like the poem

MGROVES
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california
4 posted 2006-09-05 10:05 PM


hello stranger. always a pleasure

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-09-05 10:18 PM



caramel sounds....

well done!




Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2006-09-06 07:46 AM


ladyone...yep I remember that tune..it was the 3rd hit by elvis right? (grin)thanks lady

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ms groves, thank you for the eyes ms, always thank you

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ms sun, amber with caramel quite the blend, thanks

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-09-09 02:43 AM


Sometimes when I read your poems, I think of syrup.  I feel that thick texture slowly slide over my mind.

aziza

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
8 posted 2006-09-09 10:36 AM


dawn mists

     ancient melody

perseus and panache
   honey-combed
        in siren sounds

rhythmic oceans and lorelei

~ kl





[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (09-11-2006 12:22 AM).]

vandana
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9 posted 2006-09-10 11:52 AM


enjoyed
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